I completed my first draft of my proposal and I got my feedback from Fay. I needed to explain my actual concept in further detail as I had only outlined what I was doing. I also had refer to my source of inspiration as I haven’t mentioned that I got my idea from Soccer A.M at all and I needed to do so anyone reading it would be able to refer to it to see my concept. I had set some aims to work with different people and focus on camera works and experiment with different shots. It was also mentioned to improve my scriptwriting, and to build on my editing skills and filming in studios. I am also going to experiment with character design and costuming as what the people are wearing will help set the tone, as well as the location.
FMP Film Khary Palmer 