When Fay watched my film she pointed out two scenes where there were errors. The first scene was when Troy said that Charlotte kept the most about having a chair with wheels. The issue was that the first word Troy says is Charlotte but the first person that we see is Rory.
This is not an issue for everyone in the class as we know each other but for others who do not know the class they may think that Rory is Charlotte so to solve this I quickly grabbed Charlotte and shot and establishing shot to establish who Charlotte is. I filled it in with a shot of Charlotte looking through the window at Rory.
The second scene is again with Charlotte. When Charlie says she is the best Uno player the first person we see is Annabelle which could definitely lead some people to think that Annabelle is Charlotte. So again to solve this I grabbed Charlotte again and shot a quick shot of her looking at the other Uno players.
These were the only issues that were found and after dealing with them Fay was happy with my film.
FMP Film Khary Palmer 