The only part of my scenes that received some criticism was the final one where we talk about Rory’s outfit. This is because it starts off very well with the film cutting to the parts to the outfit that we talking about. But once we’re done talking about that there is a lengthy scene of no cutaways and it’s just Charlie talking. It wasn’t too long to the point where it needed to be edited, but it was still too long and it was something that got pointed out when my film was being reviewed.
I thought about maybe filming some extra seems to cover it up, but I couldn’t think of what to put in because Charlie wasn’t talking about anything that I could film. But I didn’t want to get rid of the same because I wanted all of the answers to be the same length.
It was good that I didn’t do that because I received praise for having all my answers approximately the same length.
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